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by kate (michellealmeida)
at September 24th, 2006 (01:39 pm)

this is my september entry for another website's chlack fanfiction challenge. i was wondonering if i should put it up & what people though. check it out. <3
jack and chloe
rating ehh. not too graphic.
title station 12
prompt what will chloe do when she looks around the office and sees jack asleep when their the only ones around

let me know what you think please. :]

This is my September Challenge entry. Hope you like it. :]

Chloe was almost done packing up her things, when she looked around the office one more time. She didn't know why, though, no one else was here. That's when she saw him. Jack Bauer dead asleep at station 12. Part of her wanted to pack up her things and leave, but her other half wouldn't let her. She'd waited too long for a opportunity like this, and here it was, flashing like blinking lights in her face. She walked over to the station, and was about to put her hand through his hair, when BRING BRING her cell phone went off. Jack immediately woke up, and Chloe jumped, squealing slightly. Great, how perfect. My cell phone goes off now.

"Chloe? What are you still doing here?"

BRING BRING went her cell phone again.

"Oh, um, I was just leaving when my cell phone went off." She reached into her pocket, and grabbed her cell phone, her hand brushing by some sleeping pills she was planning on using tonight. It looked like she wouldn't need those anymore, if she was lucky. She flipped open the phone, and shut it off.

"Aren't you going to answer that?"

"Is this an interrogation? Because i'm really not scared by you Jack, incase you haven't noticed."

Chloe's eyes widened. She couldn't believe she just said that.

"Well apparently not, since you stood up to me like that." Jack smirked.

Chloe returned the smirk with a smile, and started walking back to her station.

"Where are you going?"

"What do you mean?"

"After you leave, where are you going?"

"Umm." She didn’t know what to say. Why was Jack asking that?

Jack smirked again, and got up.

"I wasn't really sleeping, you know. I knew you were starring at me. I knew you were coming over to me. I knew you were about to brush your hand in my hair."

"How?" What a stupid question. He’s Jack Bauer, for god sakes.

"I know these things. All I want to know now is why?"

"Well isn't it obvious?" whoops!

"So is this your way of telling me you’re in love with me?"

"Yes." What was she saying?! Her lips were moving, before she could even think about the words coming out.

"So if you don't mind, I’ve got somewhere to be." Chloe grabbed her bag, and her files, and started to walk away, when Jack grabbed her arm making her drop the files, and pulled her into him, his lips pressed against hers. He kissed her softly, but it was too much for Chloe. She pulled away, and looked him in the eye.

"We can't do this. I can't be you little teddy bear like Audrey."

"My Teddy bear? Chloe, I love you. I would never do that to you."

"Isn't that what you told Audrey, too?" What was she saying? Why was she ruining this for herself?

"I know you can't give up this job for anything, so why would you leave it for me?"

Completely forgetting about her files, she walked away from Jack.

“Chloe. Chloe. Chloe get back here right now.”

She turned around, tears welling up in her eyes.

“What? So I’m your bitch now, and I have to do whatever Jack wants? Well I’m not a terrorist, so you don’t need to use that technique on me. I can’t believe Audrey ever fell for that.”

“Audrey?” he asked walking closer. “Are you sure you aren’t talking about yourself?”

“Excuse me?”

“Well you keep on using Audrey as an excuse, so it’s pretty easy to connect the dots that Audrey is really you.”

“God.” Tears were falling down her face now. “Why did I have to fall in love with someone like you? I’m so stupid.”

“No, your not.” He was only inches away now. “You’re the smartest person I know. You’re always helping me. Without you, I can’t be Jack Bauer.”

“Stop saying that, we both know its not true.”

“Really? Because I believe it all the way. I love you, Chloe. I always have, and always will.”

“I love you too, Jack” she was sobbing now, “I just,”

She didn’t get to finish her sentence, because Jack had grabbed her by the neck, and pulled her into a long, passionate kiss, causing her bag to fall, and her iPOD came out. After a while, they both came up for air their hearts pounding in unison.

“You just what?” Jack finally asked.

Chloe smiled.

“I just love you.” </lj>

so what do you think?


Posted by: Nicole (nickinik09)
Posted at: January 29th, 2007 11:11 pm (UTC)

thats was really good...but...can u picture jack and chloe say that to eachother...i just can't..but that was really good

Posted by: kate (michellealmeida)
Posted at: February 25th, 2007 03:29 am (UTC)

possibly not, but some stuff at the beginning i could see chloe/jack saying. :]]

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